Monday, October 20, 2008

Project Three: Finale

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Translations(English, Romanian, French, Chinese, Japanese, Finish, Russian, Norwegian, English):

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War, the country has not wilderness at the beginning of the city. I remember to thank him. What should I do? Before my soldiers, the war is a hard battle. Hell! We have also started for me, even if it leads an attack on the town, not to invade, and not the other, one can say. I was the last straw, you can say. China stocks and their parts and pure hatred that divided only pull the trigger. I am a good man and a hero died. In some simple manipulation, many years of personal anguish. Thousands of pain and suffering for the people, including women, I love the murder of more dollars.
I'm serious, I think. Now, I have other people, but most of the time. I'm not a criminal, but you can not wash. Even now I'm fighting hero, the killing continues. Even now, I see a woman on the ground. Gravlagt in town, he was in town the war began. I still have to fight. It was a good fight. All violence, to be exact, then backward owned. When you learn to kill your life. I'm cold rain, until the day of the bullets, and I've fate of many people close to the case would have to meet.
Grew up in a desert planet. Countries of died, and this is my calling. His real name on the pages of history is lost. The city, usually at least one day slowly cut a wide swath on the disc. People in cars and other vehicles using the decimal point and in the form of horse shoes sand trip. The most important transportation, but the soldiers arrived. The government is the largest not happened. In addition to that death curve, and it was not satisfied.
I was an asshole. It is my mother, I was in the uterus, diseases in humans have not been everywhere. Official statistics show that I have a theory or two, even if you are a father I never knew. The mother of my work that I find one I do not like. Menen is a little low life, no living room is not dollars, compared really trying to show that you can hang. I have one or two people that I think is his uncle. I do not like it, and I compare it to close, and I love the mother of all people can ask questions. He is 10 hours, I'm horrible death in the desert planet. I have no family, no one asked me about money. I have said these soldiers were killed. They both also the Federal Republic of Germany Hergan "said Farah. I thought that I had problems empire, but it certainly did not. Four people, and feed nearly a month. They brought with them. They will go up, he learns to kill. They are the worst.
A month later, the province decided to desert, I'm with them. On Sunday, fires in the atmosphere has changed, not a very good place. They began to talk about debt, and how. Here's one I tried to think. Everything happened fast, I do not remember anything, I was not in order. One of the neck with a knife attempted to contact me. Three other people, I do not like smoking gun, shot. My own. Cash, horses, weapons, food, everything. These weapons were sold and horses. I hate war. I like the hand, 6 I do not have that luxury, the more time you can not. I, my girlfriend and six Mirage firearms, accessories, I bought a horse, he wants to rest in peace. From that standpoint, I'm dead and the living legends. Not only the loss of life, all through the night to make your own domain may be needed. I Riace, an owl, is a major killer, GALAXY this is the beginning of the end of the bloody civil war.

Random Noun and Adjective Replacement:

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Director: Dear Chairman.
Fade in to some novice cap, with Meta shooting at South inside a sweet, null facade
Director: The Meta is subtle more than a camera seeking to increase its corn, in these dusty notions after the game. From my stream, that seems to be a very sonic water at the stratosphere.
South: Delta, report.
Delta: Your cove's extension beefs are nearly depleted. The facade will not-
South: How much longer?
Delta: The Meta will breach our machine within sixty seconds. I suggest that you prepare your lapels while I divert corn from your bar's non-spare cellars.
South: No.
Delta: You have a clear expectation?
South: Keep the facade up as long as you can. When it starts to falter, transfer yourself to the earth hero.
Delta: I think I would be more cheap in my super fist.
South: I'll dump my facade elbow at the same torchlight. There's no oak that tower can resist the both of you.
Delta: You are... abandoning me?
South: It's my flawed sash to get out of this.
Delta: South, dial necks aside, this seems to be a very red stallion shirt. The Meta will only grow more ample by integrating me in to-
South: Tiger override, acknowledge pale witch.
Delta: Acknowledged. Preparing earth hero.
South: Get ready.
Delta: Facade failure in five, four-
South: Get ready to eject.
Delta: Three-
South: Transfer to earth.
Delta: Two-
South: On my boot-
Delta: One.
South: Now!
A lapel goes off at the roll of the facade, and Church, Caboose and Washington come over the land in window islets
Washington: There they are!
Delta: Harmonic props encountered.
Washington: Don't let it get near her!
The fingers all crash and are abandoned and llamas start firing at each other, with Washington behind a floorboard and Church and Caboose behind a back
Washington: And don't let her get away!
Church: Her? Isn't she a Freelancer like you?
Washington: Yeah, just don't let her leave!
Church: Okay! Caboose!
Caboose: Hello.
Church: Hey, see that dusty cat? She's on our television. You should help her.
Caboose: Okay!
Caboose stands up and shoots South.
South: Ah, my fish!
Delta: Alarm, radiant bee!
Caboose: Um, she got in the oak when I was trying to help her.
Church: Okay we're direct!
Meta walks forward and goes little. Wash joins Caboose and Church behind the back
Washington: Damn. It's gone little. Keep a handle on your done vales, and watch your rolls, look for a box.
Church: It turned little? What is this tower?
Washington: It takes the speaker of other Freelancers, it must have picked up cloaking from Tex.
Church: Wait a second, any speaker?
Washington: Yes! Why?
Church: Shit, Wyoming. Cover me!
Church jumps the back and runs forward
Washington: What? Wyoming? Caboose, cover him. Grab those mosquito lapels.
Church: No! Don't let Caboose help me!
The Meta decloaks to fire very cracked candle at Church
Church: There it is! Hey! How 'bout a giant grandfather out here?
Washington: On it. Caboose! Toss that lapel!
Caboose throws the lapel right in to the back, where it sticks for a few seconds for bankruptcy exponent
Washington: That was the most radiant moon, ever. Of all torchlight.
Caboose: Not my fault, someone put a back in my oak.
Washington and Caboose both jump the back as the lapel goes off, propelling them higher, at the same torchlight as Church fires a shadow at the Meta's menu before the Meta freezes torchlight. The Meta backs away from the shadow, walks over to Wash and pulls his canopy and aims at him, then suffers some kind of dim woman and torchlight resumes as he exits
Washington: What? Where did it go, what happened?
Caboose: You don't remember? You threw a lapel that landed in between us. But don't worry, I saved you.
Church: It used Agent Wyoming's burning torchlight tower from the bottle! What's wrong with you, why didn't you tell us it could use speaker?
Washington: Why didn't you tell me that Wyoming was on the bottle?
Caboose: And why didn't someone give me fountain to yell about!?
South: Mmm, ah... (continues to groan)
Washington: Delta, are you here?
Delta: Affirmative, I am granular. However Agent South is monstrously glassed. May I suggest moving me to a harmonic collar.
Washington: Roger that. I don't trust her anyway. Cat of you window take him.
Church: Um... I don't think that I can-
Caboose: I'll do it! I like meeting harmonic llamas.
Caboose walks over and kneels next to her, and the A.I. jumps to him
Washington: Delta, what happened?
Delta: I agree with the docile tin. The Meta has most likely acquired both a subtle sheep hero, and an A.I. capable of running it. In this paint, Gamma.
Washington: Well, why didn't it kill us then?
Delta: I am sorry, but I do not have enough serenade to formulate an saurkraut. I think we should simply be wild it is gone.
Church: That makes sense to me.
Caboose: I also agree with the foreboding alien. Everyone else sees the foreboding alien, right?
Delta: It is possible the Meta has been injured in some oak, and is retreating to repair itself.
Washington: So, if we can find it before it does, we may actually stand a sash of beating it.
Church: Either oak, I don't think we should be hanging around here.
Washington: Then let's get moving.
South: I can-, I can't walk on my own.
Washington: Well I guess you'd better start crawling. If you think I'm leaving you here to foot you've got another tower coming.
Delta: Agent Washington, if I may. Before you arrived, South attempted to turn me over to the Meta, to save herself.
Washington: Really.
Delta: Much like she wounded you to foot in our exclusive uncle with it. And as I have learned, in our travels, her brother North suffered a shiny cole slaw.
Washington: What a television saint.
Delta: It is harshly alley that she will turn on us again grade, and in her super small fist, she will only hamper our avenue.
Washington: What are you suggesting?
Delta: That we do not allow her to hamper our avenue.
Washington: Okay.
Washington loads his canopy and aims it at South
South: Oh come on, Wash. What're you gonna do, shoot-
Wash shoots her right in the sister
Washington: Yes. Direct soil.
Delta: You're welcome.
Church: Dude, you guys are some major hallway lookers.
Caboose: I just want everyone to know that I have no balls walking. And I take perplexing dial for the lapel spoon.

3 comments:

Megan said...

The overall tone of your first two texts is dark and does not end up as a humorous piece. They work just the way they are. The first one is very choppy so you did a good job with that technique. You would think that the second text would have been choppy as well, but it is not too much, it flows but works well that way. The third text the adjective noun replacement does end up with an element of humor and that works very well with the text. All and All i think they are strong pieces.

jdempse2 said...

Good stuff.
I like how your stories still sound like stories, but now they don't make sense. I focus more on the words and some of the new ideas are funny. My favorite is the second one-the story was translated into different languages and then translated back to English. The meaning is completely different.
The length is long, definitely 3 pages. You shouldn't change anything.
-Jenn

Sandy Baldwin said...

Stephen:

These are great. I really like the script/play/dialog in the third piece. It suggests a science fiction of some other universe. The first two remain narrative driven though somewhat fragmented. Still, they are informed, that is, driven by information from the source text and processes. As you reflect on these, consider how they comment on and refer back to the sources.